Jun 19, 2009

The Chemistry!

“How about a walk?”

She smiled warmly and replied, “Sure”

Both of them started walking on the pavement. It was 10 in the night and the road was quiet. Neither of them spoke anything but the silence was not suffocating either. They enjoyed the silence and savoured each passing second, spent in each other’s company.

It was cloudy, but they enjoyed the breeze. Suddenly the weather changed its mind and rain started pouring! She started running and took the shelter under the big banyan tree nearby. He started laughing and stood right there, enjoying the feeling of the raindrops on his face. She gave her warm smile again. He looked at her and suddenly saw something in her eyes. What was it? The same look of love, which he had in his eyes. For her!!

Both of them looked at each other, transfixed on the spot. He took a step towards her. She went a step back. He smiled and went near her. Slowly! Suddenly, she turned away, smiling to herself. He smiled and touched her tender hand. She shivered. Not because of the cold rain, but because of his warm and loving touch. Then she slowly faced him.

Yes, he was right!

He can see the love in her eyes. Love for him!

He can see the desire in her eyes. The same desire, which he had!

He can see the longing in her eyes. It didn’t hint any lust, but mere passion!

“OK, CUT”, the director shouted, “Good Shot, both of you! I can almost feel the chemistry”

The hero and the heroine smiled at the director and went to their respective chairs, while the spot boys cleaned up the so called “rain” on the set!

30 comments:

Suyambuvel. M said...

Romantic storya irukkum nenakren....Hero Sir namma Terror Rocking Rajendran dhana??

Thoorika said...

Director pavam! :D

Arv said...

I read it all over again... without the last line :P

nice one da... cheers...

Elvia said...

Twist Twist Twist :p

Swayam said...

for a second i almost thought it was the start of a beautiful story your end..:)

ANWESA said...

i liked the twist in the tale very much...

Thoorika said...

@ Arv

Many ppl did that !! Why?! :P :P Lowes is in the air huh!!! Thank you !!! :)

Thoorika said...

@ Elvia

Yes Yes Yes :P

Thoorika said...

@ Swayam

:D :D :D

Thoorika said...

@ Anwesa

Thank you very much!! BTW, If Anwesa is your name, then its a beautiful one!!! :)

Swetha Padakandla said...

i loved this! awesome twist! :D

cheers

hitchwriter said...

unfair unfair unfair...

just the wrong time to stop... just wrong...

Thoorika said...

Thanks Swetha :)

Thoorika said...

@ Dhiren

Lolz!!!!! I didnt expect this kind of reaction though!!! :D :D

Smitha said...

Nice one! The ending was a nice anticlimax! Here I was thinking abut true love and everything :)

My first time here - and I really liked it :)

Thoorika said...

Thank you Smitha !! Keep visiting !! :)

Elithraniel Arawion said...

you are becoming quite an expert at this.!!! lovely one thoo :)

Karthik said...

Twist Thoorika!! :P

Always says something like this and at the turn make a 356* degree turn.. :P

Chey... Morning I was expecting some GILMAA and GAJAGAJA... :((((

IT was like Me and Wolfie :P

Thoorika said...

Thank Anusha!! :)

Thoorika said...

You and Wolfie a?! :D :D

Morning Morning gajagaja va.. !! Ennadhu idhu ?! :P

Wolfie ku idhu theriyuma?!

harish said...

good one but why always the most expected ending.... of course there is no thrill in clichéd closures.... its always either a dream or such other stuff...

unkitta irundhu naan neraiya ethir paarkiraen sis...;-)

Thoorika said...

@ Harish

Rombo edhir pakure.. ! :(

Anurag said...

hey really nicely written....
Loved the twist :P

Thoorika said...

Thanks Anurag :)

Emaan said...

very interesting end. scriptwriter in the making huh ?

Winnie the poohi said...

LOL! Good one!

Thoorika said...

Thanks Emaan! Na.. Not interested in Script writing :) BTw, thats a very cute baby!!!

Thoorika said...

Thanks Winnie! :)

Digital D said...

story romanticnu ninachaen
adukula oru twistu...

but wen compared ur narration was better than the ones tat comes in few megaaaa serials n movies :)


Hey try writing few for me like this da!!

Thoorika said...

Finally someone actually commented on my post!!! Anyway Thank you very much Dhilip!!!