Feb 10, 2009

Wait and Watch! Last part!

Please read Part 2 here if you missed it!

And please read Part 1 here if you missed that also! 


Sachin didn’t go for dinner. When it became quite late, his aunt came to his room enquiring about him. He refused to dine and told her that he is not able to sleep. She gave him sleeping tablets and closed the door.
She came out smiling! Her husband saw her smiling and gave her one inquiring look. She motioned him to come to their room. They went inside and closed the door.
“Well what happened?”
“Plan is working out. I told you. He actually believes it. I just now gave him those so called sleeping tablets.”
“ahhha.. Good job my dear!”
“You were worrying unnecessarily. Let the so called sleeping tablets start working. In few days he will end up in mental asylum and you can ask the lawyer to make all the properties to your name since Sachin will cease to be a suitable owner to all the properties!”
He rubbed his hands in glee and enquired her
“But how did this idea come to your mind?”
“I overheard him grumbling to Sameer that his friend Swapna got transferred and she didn’t even call him after shifting to new place. Stupid! He forgot the fact that he changed his cell no recently and that girl don’t have his no. So that gave me this idea. Also I know how sensitive he has become after his parents death. So I asked you to add the story. I was sure that it will work out “
“Today he was telling something about one of his seniors also to Sameer”
“OH that guy! He got arrested in an eve teasing case. And that guy is a relative of the area MLA. Obviously, the warden cannot talk anything about him.
Good! He got arrested at the right time!”
“And now,
Just wait and watch!”

29 comments:

Karthik said...

dei naan thaan da firstu...

Karthik said...

Nee epdi short and sweeta porumaiya podrathukulla, WAIT and WATCH solradhule, en WATCH repair aayidum pola irukke

Karthik said...

Great future fr u in MEGA SERIAL...

Karthik said...

MADRAS roads vidha un kadai la pala SUDDEN TWISTS and TURNS irukku

Thoorika said...

vidu ra .. vidu ra.. adhutha story lead vo peru la dha irukunumnu sonnen.. adhuku ipdiya?! :P

Lancelot said...

Kartik rombaa koovuraa da...

@ thoorika

hope this story has not ended... because SRK said if the ending is sad it still means the story is bhaki hein..oops ithu hindi comemnts page illayo...anyways nalla story..ithodaa part 2 la Kartik thaan hero in mental assylum...eppadi lead???

Arv said...

lol@karthik...

idhu oru mega serial kathaiya? enna oru villathanama plot... he hee...

engaiyo poi engaiyo mudinchiruchu... was nice :)

take care da... cheers...

Pretty Me!! said...

I never expected this !! cool :)

Thoorika said...

@ Lancelot

lead nalla dha iruku.. enna karthik..? start panidulama?! :D

thomman said...

I think now you can jump from journalism to films. ;) Game for scriptwriting??

Elithraniel Arawion said...

adi paavi... unna kola pannama vidamaten

kanaguonline said...

What a girl.. enna oru villathanam..
Karthik sonnathu pol ungallukku mega serial direct seivatharkaana anaithu thaguthigallum vandhuvittathu :)

Thoorika said...

@ Arv

tat was my point!! :D Thanks! :)

@ Prats

Thank you :)

Thoorika said...

@ Thomman

Ha ha!!! In the end the producers will be ready to kill me just like these ppl out here who read this!!! :P dont wanna take such a risk in my life!!

@ Anusha

Why why why?! What did i do?! ;)

Thoorika said...

@ kanaguonline

Ha ha .. Thanks! :) keep visiting

Winnie the poohi said...

hey!

That was cool!

loved the pace n action packed lines.. you didnt give in anything!

Winnie the poohi said...

btw.. if you want to remove that undefined error.. change the time stamp under settings.. (undefined for date)

if you need more detailed help.. just ask :)

Thoorika said...

Winnie the pooh !!

gee!! thanks! :)

sawan said...

Karthik sonna mathiri twists and turns nalla thaan irikke.. :)

vemuri said...

hmmm jus read it....
good story...... u can def'ly write TV soaps for sure.....

when is the next story...???

Waitying!!!

Thoorika said...

@ Sawan

Ha ha!! Thanks!! :D

@ Padma

Thanks! Paakalam! Dunno when I will get a story idea next!!! :)

Padma said...

..... hey am not a tamilian... wat does pakalam mean??? does it mean stupid or something??? by the da way "VANAKAM" i jus know that word in tamil... i think i spelt it right!!!

Thoorika said...

Oh I am sorry padma! Pakalam means Lets see! Yea tats vanakam nly!

Harish said...

Somehow thought of M. Shyamalan movies after reading this series :)
Too much of Sun TV brings out the vamps in even the purest of minds, is it? :P
Btw thrs a fix on the net for the date display prob in this template!

Thoorika said...

No I aint a fan of SUN TV soap operas! Tats the point!! I don watch serials at all :D Yeah I know abt the time prob. Not getting time to fix it :(

Chriz said...

y arrest?

enna thappu pannnaaaa?

why right time..

not rude .. and all girl.. am not online these days.. travelling around..

in india now...

Thoorika said...

@ Chriz

You didnt understand the story or I wrote it so badly :(

workhard said...

Sounds like an evil plan...

Haiku

Thoorika said...

Yeah .. You read all the parts :) Nice.. Thanks!!!