Feb 5, 2009

Wait and Watch! Part-1

“How is it even possible?! Don’t joke aunty. Talk practically. How will I even believe this?! No one will believe it. Go to any guy on the road and tell him that you meet spirits in your everyday life but you won’t know that they are spirits as they come in as solid human beings! They will laugh on your face.”

She smiled mysteriously.

“What?! Why are you smiling? Ok tell me who the ghost known to me is?!

“Don’t ask me. Ask yourself. You must know someone who vanished all of a sudden without any trace. They are not ghosts. They are spirits who just had some unaccomplished mission in their previous life may be with you or that to be done through you in this birth! ”

“Ya right! Whatever!”

How did she know!?

“DUDE!!!! C’mon we gonna be late for the exam!!”

His cousin Sameer called him from downstairs. Sachin grabbed his bike keys and went down. Both of them started off to college. Sameer was rambling something. But Sachin was not listening to him.

Is it true? No! Ghosts don’t exist. Or spirits.. Whatever! But Swapna did vanish without any trace.. If they got transfers, she would have called me. No way... What am I thinking? She can’t be a spirit and all!!

Screeeeech!

“Hey! What’s happening?? Man …. The bus! Were you dreaming? Damn it!

Sachin was stumped! He didn’t notice the bus at all. He was shocked to see that he halted the bike only few feet before the bus. The driver was yelling at both of them.

“Let’s get out of here before they get down and hit us. Let me drive!”

13 comments:

Lancelot said...

me the first...dishum...

Lancelot said...

waiting and watching...is it inspired by you know poo :P

Arv said...

hmmm... I will wait... enakku pei kathai-na romba pidikkum :)

have a nice day da... cheers..

Thoorika said...

@ Lancelot!!

yeah!! Wait and watch :P

@ Arv

wait and watch! but no bad words shud come in the end!! Now itself I am telling :P

Srinivas said...

It was really thrilling...what next...

Thoorika said...

@ Sri

Wait and watch ;)

Anonymous said...

waiting .....

ps:blogrolled you :)

Karthik said...

Avvvvvv... (stands fr 2 meanin.. first a dog howling at churchyard... scary and the second Vadivelu kinda terrors) U shd have made me as hero instead os SACHIN... U knw SWAPNA is my frnd.. if she ever read this, she s goanna gt upset for pairing her with Sachin!!!

Thoorika said...

@ Pretty me!

I jus now read ur post and blogrolled and came here to see your comment! wait and watch :)

Thoorika said...

@ Karthik

When did I link sachin and swapna?! Theva illame la imagination use panu kudathu !! and you wont like being the hero when you read the ending! trust me!

The Solitary Writer said...

nalla build up.....next part padkikka poren naa ippam....

Thoorika said...

padichitu sollu epdi irukunu!

Anonymous said...

Good start... thrilling.. off to read the second part :)